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Hi! Very good and nicely done.
And a comment ... well, three perhaps. I don't know what edition of this you were using, but Baroque music usually has little if any dynamics indicated - it's left up to the performers. You need to go through the music and decide where it's to be loud and where quiet, and play it that way - exaggerate the differences in fact, and put in crescendos and decrescendos. [This is an aspect which the ALNMO is rather lacking as well!] For the piece you played (which has a particularly monotonous bass line) you could try having the cello play some sections pizzicato for example.
Secondly, see if you collectively think musically - what is going on at a given time. 'Phrasing' is what is needed; music is like speech - a sentence has a beginning and an end. So with music ... what sort of a phrase is this ... how do we begin it (dramatically, smoothly?) ... and how should it end?
The other comment hass to do with bowing, for there is the visual aspect on the video, as well as to the audience. At the beginning the two violins were out-of-sync, though you got together later and then lost it again. It is impossible to keep these completely together, but as the music begins a new section you want to get together.
I am not being critical here. I know the groups I play in fail all the time in all these aspects ... it's just what we should all strive for!
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